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Post by brandonnytrus on Nov 4, 2012 16:30:05 GMT -5
Pleaseeee ;D
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Post by MortyMan on Nov 6, 2012 7:55:31 GMT -5
I really liked it, you have a great flow between the facts at hand and the emotions involved, loved that you took the negative headlines and build them in as motivation
If I had to say something a little critic, I would like to see more movement, (I suck at it myself, so I know it can be hard lol) but the way I see it is that you could do more action work around the talk, holding Nytrus as a man of action in and out of the ring, like you did against Chicken or find a substitute or a thing to bash in or something, show the world the power of the Hardcore Icon
thats all for me keep up the great work
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