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Post by dynamocrunch1 on Nov 22, 2012 21:27:00 GMT -5
Feedback on my newest roleplay,Differences if any of you will please
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Post by Adam Steele on Nov 23, 2012 4:20:33 GMT -5
Your off to a good start, still I think I would like to see more of the person besides his moves and knowledge of moves... Dont get me wrong I can spend hours going over my moveset and watch youtube clips and so on.
A tip could be to read through the RP guidelines in the info section and maybe focus more on the man behind the moves, like Undertaker is the deadman, Cena is the hero, Santino is the oddball, etc
If you want to focus on his skill you could for example focus on the effect instead of the moves, a way to look at it could be like Punk best in the world, the old WCW storyline with Malenko and Jehrico "man of 1004 holds" or someone like Bryan Danielson pre WWE... you could even take a look at some of the guys here like Apostle Kried, for inspiration
I hope you don't think I'm out to get you this is just some constructive critism and again one mans opinion
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