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Post by Deleted on Aug 26, 2012 16:50:14 GMT -5
thoughts? criticisms?
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Post by Primal on Aug 26, 2012 17:17:29 GMT -5
Great stuff dude, I really like that you played on your relationship with Kuk and that you gave a presentation on both a private and business level
if I should add any criticism it would be that you didn't go more into the other opponents or that it is a four way, don't know if you have any plans on doing that later, so wont go into it
all in all great work and two thumbs up
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Post by Kuk Killswitch on Aug 26, 2012 17:38:08 GMT -5
Nice rp. Some grammer mistakes, but doesn't take away from the overall product.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 26, 2012 21:48:31 GMT -5
great. I would suggest using different colours for your speakers though.
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