Feedback: Changing of the Seasons

[brandonnytrus]

Please give me some feedback on my recent RP? Thanks guys ;D

[Matt Steele]

I loved the start of the RP, really liked the way you build in the changing of the seasons into the title reign thing

I think, and thats just my opinion, you should focus more on the future of your character and not so much on the past accomplishments, not that you shouldn't mention them, but its just something that came to mind.

Also was thinking that it would have had an better effect if you had done the Nikki part in a seperate RP, as it for me really took the heat of Brandon, that it suddenly turned focus to her

But overall great RP I really like your writing, just so you know, its not that Im trying to say anything bad about it, I just want to be constructive