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Post by brandonnytrus on Jan 2, 2013 15:00:10 GMT -5
Feedback please?
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Post by MortyMan on Jan 2, 2013 20:27:53 GMT -5
I liked it, your rp's are getting better and better as always
One little thing that caught my eye, was that it (to me) sounded a little like Brandon has lost faith in his possibility to win, I dont know why it bugged me, but it did, even though you came back on it with pointing to Madd Katt... I think its because I just see Brandon as a rising supernova lol
But as always a great read
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Post by "Punk" Drake Hunter on Jan 2, 2013 20:52:05 GMT -5
Mate, you keep getting better. Always stick to character is the one thing i'd suggest, because i agree with Dennis - there were a couple of lines where Brandon went a bit out of the whole arrogant character there, but overall you keep improving out of sight and i'm looking forward to the next one.
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