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Post by ianandrews on Jan 14, 2013 0:20:38 GMT -5
Can I get some feed back on my RP Message To MPW?
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Post by brandonnytrus on Jan 14, 2013 1:02:58 GMT -5
Haha, I don't know what's up with all these shoot promos.
I feel like you're great writer, when it comes to the actual speaking part of your promo. I just wish that you could make the promo, or writing just longer. It seems like you clump you're writing together. And it makes is one long paragraph. If You really stretch it out and gave specific details, you could be a real force in this industry. Although, you are one half the tag team champions.
I do enjoy reading your work. It's good stuff. I just wish, that you could really make this writing longer. That's something I needed to work on, and I really took it and ran with it. It really helped me succeed here. I think that you should really take this advice. Not to seem like a bitch or anything. Ha ha, just trying to help out.
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Post by "Punk" Drake Hunter on Jan 14, 2013 3:04:12 GMT -5
I agree with Brandon. If you really wanna go somewhere, then you definitely need to make your writing longer.
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Post by ianandrews on Jan 14, 2013 14:29:38 GMT -5
thanks guys, I'll work on that.
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