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Post by Kuk Killswitch on Jan 17, 2013 4:44:47 GMT -5
Feedback on this one please folks and folkettes?!
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Post by brandonnytrus on Jan 17, 2013 8:02:51 GMT -5
Really nice one. The match talk was brilliant and I throughly enjoyed reading it.
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Post by jasonx on Jan 17, 2013 10:06:57 GMT -5
Same as Brandon, but with one thing that needs to be different is the color scheme. Some parts are two dark to read.
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Post by Kuk Killswitch on Jan 17, 2013 15:50:28 GMT -5
Which parts? I can fix it and use that knowledge in other rps.
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Post by jasonx on Jan 17, 2013 16:07:44 GMT -5
Which parts? I can fix it and use that knowledge in other rps. Well for me it's the parts you have the writing in a red color. |
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Post by Kuk Killswitch on Jan 17, 2013 16:21:00 GMT -5
Let me try a lighter red. Tell me what you think.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 17, 2013 16:29:10 GMT -5
actually for me the blue was hard to read...
Kuk... let me just say that the work you've put out for this PPV is absolutely awesome. I think you had a great balance between your story & Match talk and it was well presented. Keep up the great work hun.
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Post by Kuk Killswitch on Jan 17, 2013 16:30:50 GMT -5
Thank you very much. I'm about to change the blue. Let me know how it looks.
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Post by "Punk" Drake Hunter on Jan 17, 2013 16:44:29 GMT -5
Well done mate, this is one of your best and i can see the work you've put into this RP, you've done exceptionally well, great job.
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Post by Kuk Killswitch on Jan 17, 2013 16:49:52 GMT -5
Appreciate it!
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Post by jasonx on Jan 18, 2013 11:59:56 GMT -5
Better color scheme now mate too.
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