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Post by ianandrews on Jan 19, 2013 15:40:58 GMT -5
Feed back on my new RP Please?
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Post by Deleted on Jan 19, 2013 18:37:45 GMT -5
Ian. Have to say that you are getting better. Here's my thoughts:
1. This is technically a character Development RP so when I get on the pc later I will move it
2.It was well written and cuz it was CD the length is perfectly fine However had this been for a match it would need a little bit more . Would be good to see much more match from you in future RP's.
If you ever need or want advice on an RP before you post I am more than happy to help... and that goes for anybody. Just send it thru PM. I know Im not perfect but I can at least help with something.
Cheers
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Post by Johnny Clash on Jan 19, 2013 21:46:45 GMT -5
I have learned this weekend that Canadians say cheers a lot ^
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