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Post by ianandrews on Feb 2, 2013 10:57:46 GMT -5
Feedback on my new RP please
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Post by Chris Cable on Feb 3, 2013 15:49:19 GMT -5
Just if you added in another segment or two just to make the rp a little more enjoyable than do that, the writing was good there just had to be a little more
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Post by ianandrews on Feb 3, 2013 22:33:08 GMT -5
I added a segment, tell me what you think.
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