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Post by Kuk Killswitch on Mar 6, 2013 7:47:54 GMT -5
Feedback on this one would be appreciated!!!!!! ;D
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Post by ajstark on Mar 6, 2013 13:34:05 GMT -5
Have to say it was a good read. Most people believe if u put to much story over match info its a waste but it was beautifully done loved the cliff hanger at the end it was amazing. The only piece of advice I have is to proof read cause some mistakes don't get caught like one of the sixs in ur rp came out as sex but other than that amazing hope I get to work with u.
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Post by Chris Cable on Mar 6, 2013 18:29:59 GMT -5
Really great rp Kustar, loved every second of it. I've enjoyed reading your stuff over the last few weeks so keep it up =)
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