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Post by Da Big Guy on Mar 19, 2013 23:31:10 GMT -5
Feedback on it please
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Post by gabegriffin on Mar 20, 2013 10:48:26 GMT -5
I thought it was very well done, good flow overall. I will say where it lacked for me was in some of teh descriptive areas, its one of my shortcomings as well, try to show us and not tell us the action, otherwise I thought the voice was well done and you knew where taufik was at and how he felt about it.
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