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Post by The Night Terrors on Jun 22, 2013 22:57:01 GMT -5
Well, I know I'm new here, so not many of you might read my rp, but It's the beginning of two new characters (I've never done the dark heel thing before, so I was hoping to get some feedback from my first rp. Criticisms more than welcome. Thanks...
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Post by Deleted on Jun 23, 2013 23:24:52 GMT -5
I really liked how you've started to build the characters...I was just wondering are you planing on making Samuel gay or bi? Nothing against that at all, just that it might come off that way with him hitting on guys and kissing them and such, so if that wasn't your intention I just wanted to point it out, if so then that's great. Not to say I didn't really enjoy it. It would be interesting to see it develop further thou.
Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
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Post by The Night Terrors on Jun 24, 2013 6:32:05 GMT -5
Samuel is just, well.... Samuel, lol. He is just punishing boundaries. I'm not even sure he would know what he is when it comes to sexual orientation because of how twisted he is in the head. He just likes to mess with people's minds...
As a straight guy in real life, if someone punches me, it will physically hurt, but that's about it. If somebody like Samuel were to kiss me on the lips, it would mess with my mind, which I believe would be worse. Samuel was just trying to push "Adam", the drunk college student, in a way that would be worse than violence...
But, like I've said before, Samuel and Clay are completely new to me to roleplay with, and I'm still figuring out many things about their characters. I do know though that To Samuel, sex is just a thing you do with the body. He really gets off on causing pain, whether its mental, physical, or emotional. He probably gets off on having pain inflicted upon him too...LOL
Thanks for the feedback, and I will continue to slowly build up a backstory for these characters...
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Post by Adam Steele on Jul 10, 2013 3:33:43 GMT -5
Know this is for another RP, but well I wanted to say I love how you grabbed the story of Matt and Adam and worked it.... one thing though... Now I have nothing to rp about jk... great work
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Post by The Night Terrors on Jul 10, 2013 9:54:18 GMT -5
I Appreciate the feedback, you gave me plenty to work with, and I was hoping to do the same...
As for my latest roleplay, it was actually tough to write, because the stories I wrote about the dead Arvilla people were the real life stories of them. I am one of those Arvilla folk who just live day to day, not going towards my dream, so I guess that was my own "dark side" about how I feel about my own life sometimes, that unless your fighting for what you want in life, then your just wasting time till you die...
Hopefully I can expand on that thought, because I think there may be something in it for Samuel and Clay...
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