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Post by Adam Steele on Jun 27, 2013 17:44:22 GMT -5
Any feedback is appreciated, especially if you can tell me if the dynamic between the two works or needs something
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Post by The Night Terrors on Jun 27, 2013 18:27:03 GMT -5
I like the dynamic between the brothers, and hope you tease some tension between the brothers with Adam's new found "serious" attitude and Matt's "no-so-serious" attitude. Seeing tension between the brothers might be a great place to come up with new ideas for roleplays...
However, I think that you need to work on a bit more editing on your roleplays from a grammar/punctuation/capitalization aspect. Not trying to be picky, but I know that in most of past feds, it you don't fix those kind of mistakes, you will have a tough time trying to move up the ladder. Just my two cents...
Also, not to push anything, but I thought we we could only post a maximum of one roleplay per day?
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Post by MPW Owner Bob Herman on Jun 27, 2013 20:06:31 GMT -5
did you guys agree on two roleplays for this match?
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Post by The Night Terrors on Jun 27, 2013 21:18:18 GMT -5
did you guys agree on two roleplays for this match? No, we didn't talk about number of roleplays. I didn't know we had to agree on two roleplays. I thought it was just a minimum of one and a max of two for TNT. Sorry if got things mixed up. That the only reason I posted my first roleplay so early this week...lol |
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Post by Adam Steele on Jun 28, 2013 8:03:44 GMT -5
well everything got a bit rushed and true about the rp thing, but well everything turned out good, at least from my perspective. I know about the grammar thing and spelling, but the spell check didn't work :-(.... but thanks for the feedback
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