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Post by brandonnytrus on Aug 25, 2013 9:25:39 GMT -5
I just kinda whipped it up, so I know it's not my best.
What did you guys think?
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Post by Deleted on Aug 25, 2013 11:55:27 GMT -5
One piece of advice I was given that I will extend to you, when writing either heel or face...never give ur opponents power by admitting you think they are better than you. I saw in the comparison that you bring up your own weaknesses. I think that mentioning one thing is fine but build on that and give ur character confidence. Just remember you are supposed to be convincing an audience why you are better so don't talk about how ur opponents may have advantages. Just my opinion.  Btw I fixed ur coding for you. When you close out always reverse them... I.e. color b ccenter.. should end center b color |
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