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Chicken
Aug 1, 2012 14:52:11 GMT -5
Post by Emi's Imaginary Friend on Aug 1, 2012 14:52:11 GMT -5
Okay, I don't normally ask for a lot of feedback for my work, but I was just wondering what you think of the character Chicken. His story is like nothing that I've done in an e-fed, but I'm unsure whether or not to continue his story. Is he worth keeping in my roleplays? Please let me know.
btw if anyone's interested, his pic base is Spike Dudley.
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Chicken
Aug 1, 2012 16:19:50 GMT -5
Post by Matt Steele on Aug 1, 2012 16:19:50 GMT -5
I think you should keep it going, I see potential for a lot of comical and melodrama in it and you got him nailed perfectly I can relate to the guy, so maybe others can to and he also gives you a chance to break the seriousness in the RP giving the reader a chance to digest the points you want across... in my opinion I love it and you've done a great job to either create a creepy stalker or an "everyday joe" (no offence intended)
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