darkdisciple
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My shoe size is 11 in case you were wondering.
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Post by darkdisciple on Jul 22, 2012 12:56:05 GMT -5
So, for some reason I didn't like this RP as much as I normally like my RPs. Not sure if it's because I tried to make it mostly match talk, or if it was because it's shorter than normal. Anyways, I'd appreciate feedback on it, I'm always trying to improve, and I feel like I've been going in the opposite direction lately.
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Jackson Blaze
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I'm the bastard. I'm better than you and I don't give a fuck what you think about that.
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Post by Jackson Blaze on Jul 22, 2012 16:59:35 GMT -5
I personally don't see where you're thinking youre going backwards. You added match talk to a story RP. That's always a plus. So, i was for one very happy to see the improvement. Yes, it was shorter than it needed to be, but I still give you the credit for improving your work. But, don't get too focused on the length. Because, like other aspects of life, it's the size that matters compared to what you do with it.
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