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Post by Matt Steele on Aug 27, 2012 3:47:27 GMT -5
Hey guys
Would love some feedback on this, its very short, but would be nice to get some pointers on how to make the "meeting" and rp's better
cheers
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darkdisciple
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Post by darkdisciple on Aug 27, 2012 19:58:23 GMT -5
You could do more to develop the scenes, maybe introduce some of the other characters in the meetings. Don't overdo it, but don't be afraid to detail the scenes more.
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Post by Matt Steele on Aug 28, 2012 12:00:26 GMT -5
Cool thanks, was actually one of the things I was a little unsure of, cause I feared it would take focus from the message it self, but will keep it in mind for the next rp :-)
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