Jake Cage
New Member
Never forget....I'm part of your balanced breakfast!
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Post by Jake Cage on Sept 6, 2012 2:34:45 GMT -5
just wondering your thoughts.....i tried a different way a match talk through song.....hope it went well...
might not be everyone's cup of tea
let me know down berow!
CHAO OUTSIDE MUTHA FUCKA!
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Post by stepupgm on Sept 6, 2012 10:27:17 GMT -5
Almost as much fun to read as it probably was to write, well done. A little hard to follow at some points, but I think that speaks volumes about Jake Cage as a character being slightly unstable.
I like finding one little thing I can criticism people on, just so they have something they can improve on, but I'm laughing to hard to think of one right now. So for now I'll just say good job.
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Post by MortyMan on Sept 6, 2012 11:18:07 GMT -5
I agree with the boss... great stuff... I have one little thing though
I cant get the C-A-G-E song out of my head
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Post by Da Big Guy on Sept 6, 2012 12:00:46 GMT -5
Oh damn..... Nice one dude  |
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