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Post by Deleted on Sept 6, 2012 16:00:01 GMT -5
First, I'd like to appologise for the length. I'm in a severe slump this week. But any thoughts?
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Post by MortyMan on Sept 6, 2012 16:18:10 GMT -5
I liked, short and to the point.... but starting to think we need to get you into anger management lol
Nah just kidding, if I had anything to say about it it could have been more detailed, but you showed me that in your RP last week, so good stuff
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Post by Deleted on Sept 6, 2012 16:21:36 GMT -5
thanks man. like i said, im sorry it's so short
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Post by Deleted on Sept 6, 2012 16:38:49 GMT -5
yeah I thought it was great writing...but i would maybe strive for more match talk and a little more length. Look forward to seeing more
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