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[Emi's Imaginary Friend]

Okay well, I know it isn't my best work, but it has been a while since I roleplayed as Ms. Biguns, and this is also her first match. Hard not to write it in a similar style to Chicken's rps, and I'm still unsure on how it turned out. But what do you guys think?
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[Kuk Killswitch]

I enjoyed this one. Like I said before, I enjoy smaller rps better. Good job!