Revenge will be serve feedback

[Da Big Guy]

I know that this rp might be the worse one I've done yet. But i still would love to see what feedback i could get from it. be brutally honest if you need to

[Kuk Killswitch]

I liked it man. Haven't read a lot from you, but in my personal opinion I prefer shorter rps to longer rps. Yours was good. No complaints from me.