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Post by Deleted on Sept 20, 2012 10:50:32 GMT -5
Hi! I would love to have some feedback on my Introduction RP for James Harlow.
Thanks!
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Post by cyrusmoore on Sept 20, 2012 21:48:05 GMT -5
James...
I really like it man. Great description of the character. Could have been a little bit more, but you nailed some of the important stuff. I like the way Bobby was trying to talk him out of it but James had already made up his mind. But next time, lose the pills lmao. But overall good introduction man. Looking forward to seeing more of you around MPW!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 21, 2012 15:33:02 GMT -5
Thanks, Cyrus.
I'm happy to be a part of MPW. I haven't RPed in an e-fed in awhile and I missed it immensely.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 21, 2012 21:12:01 GMT -5
I liked ur rp. looking forward to seeing more from you
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Post by Deleted on Sept 22, 2012 16:13:43 GMT -5
Thank you, Bliss. It's an uphill battle to shake off the "ring rust" but I am determined to do my best.
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